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               | A Review of: Fruitfly Geographic by Andrew SteinmetzThe poems in Fruitfly Geographic,  Stephen Brockwell's third book,
are generally hard and clear, clean and spare: pure things made by
an imagist. The poem "Dart" is a good place to begin. The
clarity and attention to rhythm and careful use of enjambment will
fascinate, and reward, the close reader. Here, in the first 13
lines, Brockwell's aim is true:  
 
I've spent half my life  
                learning to play darts  
in the dark. To find  
                the sharp point without  
bleeding was the first  
                lesson. To measure  
distances by the dart's  
                thud in the wood  
paneling downstairs  
                or by the skitter  
of feathers on the  
                linoleum floor  
was the second.  
 
The poems range from brief three liners ("Montreal",
"Toronto"), to one-page travel pieces ("Penang",
"Meditation On The Cold From The Home Office",
"Aukland"). "Hand Of The Father" is a handsome
elegy, and in "Blue Bonnets" Brockwell  looks though his
grandfather's discriminatory bet-making eye, and we end up with
alternate visions of the same horse at the race track   
 
Does a mare  
pummel the turf  
with her hooves  
or is her gait -  
the counter-weight  
canter of the sulky  
the full-throttle  
gallop of the flailed  
furlong-a strategy?  
 
Other  poems, such as "Three Deaths of Hippasus Of Metapontum",
"Parthenon Stallion's Head", "Aphrodite of Melos",
are playful and intelligent, but of a more abstract nature. In the
powerful "History of Scribes", the lines are relaxed, the
metaphor plain-spoken: "The ideal scribe / has no understanding
/ of the content of a message." What better description of an
imagist poet than these first three lines? Later, Brockwell enlivens
the metaphor with a narrative.  
 
It is said the king's trusted scribe Nasul  
transcribed his own death sentence.  
Loyal in matters of the text,  
beautiful, nave Nasul  
seduced the king's  
daughter in her royal chambers.  
His sentence read exactly as follows:  
Ima hanta hasi ol siman nasul ponti holotle.  
The untranslatable  
may be paraphrased:  
I, Nasul, for violating the princess,  
will cut off my hands.  
 
Brockwell has a gift for the well-crafted short poems. "Tiger
Lily" is reminiscent of Pound's "In The Station of the
Metro". The poem reads:  
 
Grass cannot grow  
        tall enough  
to cover  
 
the fire bulb  
of the tiger lily.  
 
        The black  
fleck on the petal  
        names the species.  
 
"A Jar Of Gasoline" is slyly named after Wallace Stevens's
"Anecdote of the Jar" (which, itself, famously begins,
"I placed a jar in Tennessee"). In Brockwell's poem the
last line whips the preceding lines into action. In an instant, it
forms an image for the reader that transcends the sum of its parts.
Here it is in full  
 
        Fire rises in a field  
hidden from the road  
by a tangle of hawthorns.  
To conquer  
fear by lighting fire,  
a boy holds a jar of gasoline,  
afraid to let it fall;  
his friends watch him.  
As the column of flame  
climbs to the jar,  
        a voice  
                calls. Heat  
cracks the glass in his hand. 
  
                      
                    
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